weirdos counting comments
some people count
the dollars in their banks
some count the cunts
they have fucked
some count the countries
they've visited
some others count
countless things they like
but the commenters
at the Intentblog are
counting the comments
to make to a thousand tonight
their minds are empty
dumb and stupid they are
so they write
"how are you? are you
fine tonight? today sun
was shining very bright"
Or "come on guys, hit
to your PCs, hit the keys
to make it to a
thousand comments tonight"
so with this trivial game
that their trivial minds play
they are passing their time
to hit to 1000 before midnight
these are the weirdos -
the followers of a spiritual guru
whose soul has been enlightened
countless number of times
but not fully yet to enlighten
the disciples' souls a few times.
the dollars in their banks
some count the cunts
they have fucked
some count the countries
they've visited
some others count
countless things they like
but the commenters
at the Intentblog are
counting the comments
to make to a thousand tonight
their minds are empty
dumb and stupid they are
so they write
"how are you? are you
fine tonight? today sun
was shining very bright"
Or "come on guys, hit
to your PCs, hit the keys
to make it to a
thousand comments tonight"
so with this trivial game
that their trivial minds play
they are passing their time
to hit to 1000 before midnight
these are the weirdos -
the followers of a spiritual guru
whose soul has been enlightened
countless number of times
but not fully yet to enlighten
the disciples' souls a few times.

1 Comments:
they also write:
forest green at 4 am
a wooden floor
the remnants of a forest
smooth and cool
in early morning light
my feet can feel the trees within the floor
my soles caress and feel a gentle crunch,
the velvet
of the leaves
that left us long ago
my home, my floor, my soles, my toes,
looking for a cool stream's course,
then find the shower's cool wet tiles
in lieu of something else.
© 1:50 AM EDST, 19 Jul 2006 Heather Quinn
...which imho is not half-bad
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