Tuesday, July 18, 2006

weirdos counting comments

some people count
the dollars in their banks

some count the cunts
they have fucked

some count the countries
they've visited

some others count
countless things they like

but the commenters
at the Intentblog are

counting the comments
to make to a thousand tonight

their minds are empty
dumb and stupid they are

so they write
"how are you? are you

fine tonight? today sun
was shining very bright"

Or "come on guys, hit
to your PCs, hit the keys

to make it to a
thousand comments tonight"

so with this trivial game
that their trivial minds play

they are passing their time
to hit to 1000 before midnight

these are the weirdos -
the followers of a spiritual guru

whose soul has been enlightened
countless number of times

but not fully yet to enlighten
the disciples' souls a few times.

1 Comments:

Blogger Heath Quinn said...

they also write:

forest green at 4 am

a wooden floor
the remnants of a forest
smooth and cool
in early morning light
my feet can feel the trees within the floor
my soles caress and feel a gentle crunch,
the velvet
of the leaves
that left us long ago
my home, my floor, my soles, my toes,
looking for a cool stream's course,
then find the shower's cool wet tiles
in lieu of something else.


© 1:50 AM EDST, 19 Jul 2006 Heather Quinn

...which imho is not half-bad

2:59 PM  

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